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Claire De Lune

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shes left the world to stand on its own. without hands pearl white to expand and compress age-old ribs. the oceans have turned a dark hazel and the clouds a brokenhearted gold. dreams arent fastened to the tender wrists of their dreamers. but welded and forceful to the branches of the apple tress with blossoms too late for August.

                                                               shes left the world to stand on it's own.
continued possibly.

random collaboration- havent written in so long..

struggling on wether to put "heart broken gold, "heart breaking gold, or "brokenhearted gold"...opinions? each one holds a different meaning...not quite sure which fits best.
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Solarune's avatar
Totally beautiful. I haven't listened to Claire De Lune in a while but it's beautiful, this is a fantastic piece of writing. :)
For the sake of critique, two typos I caught; 'on it's own' should be 'on its own' and 'tender wirsts' should be 'tender wrists' (unless wirsts is a word I don't know about :lol:)
I think heartbroken gold works well. :)
Lovely work!